Editing Checklist
“Imaginative response to an advertisement”
1. Sentence length – varied length or deliberately chosen length.
2. Sentence openings – varied openings.
3. Punctuation – used correctly?
4. Have you tried to use something other than commas and full stops?
5. Vocabulary – try to find two or three places where you can use a more effective word – look at verbs particularly.
6. Can you identify clearly what the response says about growing up and how this challenges what the advertisement says? Write a sentence summarizing this. Post this to your blog with the new version of your imaginative response.
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